Dawn's honey
Prompt challenge: Use at least two yellow things in a poem without using the word "yellow." My response takes the path of dawn—whe...
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The 12 inch heel, the confident gait, The measured steps, the sudden halt, The blush on cheeks, the smoldering eyes, The hands on h...
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It was her umpteenth shift in that cramped bus on a Monday morning. She had hoped to avoid the digging arms and elbows. But to no avail. ...
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“ Chubby cheeks, dimple chin, Rosy lips, teeth within, Curly hair, very fair, Eyes are blue, lovely too. Daddy’s pet, is that you? ” ...

Lovely take.
ReplyDeleteThank you Dale for appreciating and encouraging
DeleteWhat an interesting spin; such regret, how sad.
ReplyDeleteI am glad that the underlying feelings of post come across. Thank you so much for such heartfelt appreciation
DeleteLoved this.
ReplyDeleteAnd these words are an honour to hear. Thank you so much
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