Friday, July 24, 2015

Wintery musings

We fall, like snow flakes.
Crystal wishes blanketing.
Melting and blending,
The firelight keeping us warm.
Winter leaves a blazing trail.

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17 comments:

  1. Dear Ruby,

    Short and nicely done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  2. This is beautiful! Loved the imagery.

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    1. I did try Kalpana but this is my first tanka and I think it is not very crisp

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    2. Thank you for your encouragement

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  4. Beautiful imagery. You've captured winter and the photo!

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    1. Thank you Yolanda for your kind words.

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    1. Thank you Marcy. It is lovely to hear from you

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  6. That's beautiful and peaceful. Great take.

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  7. Short and sweet! Don't be so hard on yourself, your tanka told us everything it needed to!

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    1. Thank you so much Dale for such encouraging kind words.

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