We fall, like snow flakes.
Crystal wishes blanketing.
Melting and blending,
The firelight keeping us warm.
Winter leaves a blazing trail.
Linking with Friday Fictioneers
Crystal wishes blanketing.
Melting and blending,
The firelight keeping us warm.
Winter leaves a blazing trail.
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Linking with Friday Fictioneers
Dear Ruby,
ReplyDeleteShort and nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
This is beautiful! Loved the imagery.
ReplyDeleteThank you Shailaja.
DeleteA lot said in so few words
ReplyDeleteI did try Kalpana but this is my first tanka and I think it is not very crisp
DeleteThank you for your encouragement
DeleteBeautiful imagery. You've captured winter and the photo!
ReplyDeleteThank you Yolanda for your kind words.
DeleteLovely to visualize this!
ReplyDeleteThank you Marcy. It is lovely to hear from you
DeleteThat's beautiful and peaceful. Great take.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much
DeleteShort and sweet! Don't be so hard on yourself, your tanka told us everything it needed to!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Dale for such encouraging kind words.
DeleteShort, sweet and beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much.
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