Days come to an end, dreams don't. There's miles to go before we sleep...
Twilight,
wild wings
seek sheltered nook.
Fledglings,
back home,
await their gifts.
Disquieting,
lurking what-ifs
raise their heads.
Unheeding
sunset ahead,
deferred dreams instigate.
Hurrah!
some elbow-grease,
you’re almost there.
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Welfare unto all 🤗 🤗 🤗
Twilight,
wild wings
seek sheltered nook.
Fledglings,
back home,
await their gifts.
Disquieting,
lurking what-ifs
raise their heads.
Unheeding
sunset ahead,
deferred dreams instigate.
Hurrah!
some elbow-grease,
you’re almost there.
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Flavors of Robert Frost and Langston Hughes in this post
You did a good job describing the struggles of the narrator at the beginning. I wanted to know what happened that caused the hope at the end. The Robert Frost and Langston Hughes references should probably be credited.
ReplyDeleteWill try to refine the structure further. I didn't realize I had used words of such renowned authors.. Will edit the post
DeleteI love that second stanza. There's something so very evocative about the image.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Christine for such encouraging words
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