Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart. ~ William Wordsworth
Sounds exhausting..you captured the scene perfectly with the words you chose. I felt such pity. Must have been an awful heavy wagon. Well done!
Thank you Kathy ... I am glad that the scene gets conveyed. I really appreciate your visits:)Stay blessed,Ruby
You really took me there. Such evocative writing!
Thank you Susan. Nothing more pleasing to hear than such words. I am glad I could narrate the scene this way
Great job conveying his struggle.
Thank you so much Christine. I am glad his struggle came across
Unique perspective in this little story.
Thank you Cynk. I am glad to hear such appreciations for this little work
Very good job describing the events!
Thank you Donetta
Since every thought is a seed, I am looking forward to a delicious harvest.