A welcome glint
In moments of stillness, when the chaos quiets and nature reveals its gentle truths, even a fleeting beam of sunlight becomes a messenger of...
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The 12 inch heel, the confident gait, The measured steps, the sudden halt, The blush on cheeks, the smoldering eyes, The hands on h...
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I, me, mine echoes all around. The temples ache, and so does the heart. Ah! I long for mother’s lap. To empty the burdens That ...
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Science had failed to heal him, brazenly called him insane. Perhaps it was right, perhaps not. Desperate, his people sought Elvira, the r...
Sounds exhausting..you captured the scene perfectly with the words you chose. I felt such pity. Must have been an awful heavy wagon. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThank you Kathy ... I am glad that the scene gets conveyed. I really appreciate your visits:)
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Ruby
You really took me there. Such evocative writing!
ReplyDeleteThank you Susan. Nothing more pleasing to hear than such words. I am glad I could narrate the scene this way
DeleteGreat job conveying his struggle.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Christine. I am glad his struggle came across
DeleteUnique perspective in this little story.
ReplyDeleteThank you Cynk. I am glad to hear such appreciations for this little work
DeleteVery good job describing the events!
ReplyDeleteThank you Donetta
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