Wednesday, December 17, 2014

Lost but found

So, I stared,
Too long,
That
She looked up.
And
In that moment,
I drowned eternally,
In those
Caramelized deeps.
Never bothering to return to shore.
And right there,
In that coffee-shop,
I redeemed,
I retrieved,
All of myself,
From dark abysses.


16 comments:

  1. I love the image of staring too long.

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    1. Thank you so much Michelle for stopping by and such kind words.

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  2. Oh to lose oneself in the depths of someone's eyes...now that is romance.

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    1. Yeah ... And I am glad that the idea gets conveyed

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  3. Ah, yes, best to retrieve yourself from an abyss, always!

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    1. Yeah, Who would want to spend life in an abyss. Thank you so much Kymm.

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  4. A bit of love at first sight? Intriguing!

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    1. Like all the love bibles tell us. Thank you so much .

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  5. Love "Caramelized deeps" and the contrast with the "dark abysses."

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    1. That happened unconsciously. But when I re-read it in light of your observation, even I like the contrast

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  6. So poetic! Makes you want to read over and over. I also love "caramelized deeps." Great word choices.

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  7. I agree with everyone else: "caramelized deeps" is beautiful!

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    1. Thanks a tons. I am glad the phrase is being liked.

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Since every thought is a seed, I am looking forward to a delicious harvest.