Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart. ~ William Wordsworth
Doesn't sound like a very promising fate since either way you lose. Loved the imagery you evoked. Very poetic.
Thank you Kathy for such encouraging words
Wow, zeroed souls. Does seem to be all or nothing! Nice write, Ruby!
Thank you Kymm for such positive feedback
Wow I feel breathless. I felt as if the words themselves were falling
Thank you so much.
Loved reading !
Thank you so much
I agree, breathless. Great job, Ruby!!!
Thank you so much Gina. It is so good to hear from you.
Really nice answer to the question, Ruby. I loved the choice you pose. ("We can take the risk and fall. Or....")
Thank you so much Christine. I am really glad you liked it.
Sometimes doing the right thing is so difficult.
Rightly said. Thank you so much.
So much said in so few words. Very nicely done!
Thank you so much Susan for your kind words.
Extraordinary word choices and usage! Excellent thought-provoking poetry. Found you on Yeah, Writes. Looking forward to more.Sempiternal?Best to you,Sally
Thank you so much Sally. It is a pleasure hearing from you.Sempiternal : infiniteBest to you and yours.
Since every thought is a seed, I am looking forward to a delicious harvest.