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That's your sign

That hug,
The embrace
That's a liniment
For this
Earthly mass,
The warmth
Seeping through
The layers of
Clothes I wear,
Calming
My frayed soul,
Embalming
It with
Your million dollar smile.
I was healed,
The moment
You
Pulled the door
Yesterday.



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  1. Soumyaa VermaJune 23, 2014 at 11:49 AM

    You've said so much in those 42 words. And well said, indeed.

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    1. Whispering ThoughtsJuly 5, 2014 at 7:06 PM

      Thank you so much Soumyaa. It is always a pleasure to hear from you and you yourself are a fabulous writer

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  2. KirJune 23, 2014 at 12:28 PM

    The moment a person changes your life. *happy sigh*
    I loved this take on the prompt.

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  3. AnonymousJune 23, 2014 at 12:47 PM

    Yes, I know this feeling. Ah . . .

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  4. UnknownJune 23, 2014 at 3:42 PM

    WOW, this is amazing.

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  5. AnonymousJune 23, 2014 at 7:02 PM

    Brilliant! I like this one a lot.

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  6. C.C.June 23, 2014 at 8:07 PM

    The idea of a hug as liniment....so gorgeous :-)

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  7. UnknownJune 24, 2014 at 5:09 AM

    i really enjoy the "healing" and "yesterday" connection. wonderful :)

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    1. Whispering ThoughtsJuly 5, 2014 at 7:16 PM

      Thank you so much Malaika. It is a pleasure to hear from you

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  8. AnonymousJune 24, 2014 at 5:16 AM

    Beautiful and soothing. I enjoyed this.

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  9. Jen BrunettJune 24, 2014 at 7:39 AM

    "Embalming It with Your million dollar smile."
    Now THAT is an amazing line. Very lovely job!

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    1. Whispering ThoughtsJuly 5, 2014 at 7:18 PM

      Thank you so much Jen, It is so good to hear such positive feedback on little piece

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  10. AnonymousJune 24, 2014 at 9:54 AM

    The moment you feel that electricity with someone is an incredible sign, indeed.

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  11. AnonymousJune 24, 2014 at 11:02 AM

    I like the way you carried the theme of healing so smoothly through the entire piece.

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    1. Whispering ThoughtsJuly 5, 2014 at 7:20 PM

      Thank you so much. It is so encouraging to hear such kind words from you

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  12. UnknownJune 24, 2014 at 5:05 PM

    That moment -- when you know -- is magical and you've done such a lovely job revealing it. For your character, it was a door opening. For me, it was watching my husband's profile as he was putting coins in a jukebox on our very first date. I knew. Your piece reminded me of this. Thank you.

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    1. Whispering ThoughtsJuly 5, 2014 at 7:21 PM

      I am glad you can connect to this little piece. Thank you so much Meg. It is wonderful to hear from you

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