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Felicitous Life

Felicitous life,
Flanked by,
Innocence
Blooming
In
Frilly frocks,
Youngest
Fell asleep
In the humdrum
Of
Flooded local,
Endeavors
To rise her
Foiled
By
Summered stubbornness.
The eldest
Splashed
Water,
Feigned innocence,
Until that rubbing-eyes
Sleepy
“Who dunnit”
Set her giggling.

Linking with Blogging from A to Z Challenge - April 2014
Linking with Yeah Write # 156 - Gargleblaster
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  1. AnonymousApril 7, 2014 at 11:17 AM

    This is cute - siblings do love to mess with each other!

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  2. Crystal CollierApril 7, 2014 at 12:48 PM

    My kids did that to their older brother the other day while he was napping on the couch. I rubbed my temples, lectured, and wondered how long this stage will last. :)

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    1. Whispering ThoughtsApril 8, 2014 at 10:34 AM

      Wow, I am sure they must have had great time doing it to one another. I saw this happening in the local bus and we were all having a great time watching these kids.

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  3. ChanceletApril 7, 2014 at 3:39 PM

    Very cute poem. Nice theme that flows through, and like the guilty/innocent ending. :) Writer’s Mark

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  4. ChanceletApril 7, 2014 at 3:40 PM

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  5. HistorySleuthApril 7, 2014 at 5:38 PM

    Oh that was very good! And what a wonderful way to do the letter.
    History Sleuth's Writings - Blogging A-Z

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    1. Whispering ThoughtsApril 8, 2014 at 10:36 AM

      Thank you Cindy. I am glad you liked the little post

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  6. Whispering ThoughtsApril 8, 2014 at 10:35 AM

    Thank you so much for your visit and encouragement.

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