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The Sacred Sacrifice - Chapter 2

CHAPTER 2 7 POH - The Night of Betrayal and Separation In December 1704, a dark chapter of betrayal, sacrifice, and separation unfolded in S...

Monday, February 10, 2014

Iron-man

He went there.
Daily.
Unfailingly.
His conversations,
Candid,
Intimate.
And why not!
He had
Inspired
That iron-man,
She had crafted it
In anger.
So daily,
He stood there.
Solitary,
But,
Somehow,
Not lonely.

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33 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 10, 2014 at 10:02 AM

    Makes me curious for more which is always a sign of good writing.

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  2. rebeccaFebruary 10, 2014 at 11:04 AM

    Methinks the Muse might have been a bit of a devil...hence, the breakup ;)

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  3. Ally February 10, 2014 at 11:33 AM

    Clever and unique take on the prompt

    Enjoyed

    Ally:)

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  4. brudbergFebruary 10, 2014 at 12:00 PM

    he.. they seem to have an interesting conversation...

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    1. Whispering ThoughtsFebruary 11, 2014 at 9:04 AM

      Yeah, wish we could be part of his musings but he preferred to be lonely :) Thank you so much Bjorn

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  5. UnknownFebruary 10, 2014 at 1:11 PM

    Interesting take on the prompt♥

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  6. AnonymousFebruary 10, 2014 at 1:49 PM

    Funny how he was drawn to it. The photo is perfect to reflect the mirrored angry posture :)

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  7. kymmFebruary 10, 2014 at 3:57 PM

    Love it! That's one way I wouldn't mind it going wrong somehow.

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  8. AnonymousFebruary 10, 2014 at 7:35 PM

    I love this "She had crafted it in anger. So daily, he stood there." So much like those of us "in love" so often did, just to preserve what we never truly had in the first.

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  9. AnonymousFebruary 11, 2014 at 6:52 AM

    what a great opening to drawing the reader into wanting the rest of that story!

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  10. Carol J ForresterFebruary 11, 2014 at 11:17 AM

    I love this take, the use of visdare's prompt in it adds an extra kick.

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  11. garrisonjamesFebruary 11, 2014 at 3:04 PM

    This could easily lead into quite a bit more. Very nicely done.

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  12. AnonymousFebruary 12, 2014 at 8:55 AM

    Loved this.

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  13. IvyFebruary 12, 2014 at 8:03 PM

    I like that he's drawn to it even though it's probably not the most flattering likeness. It's as if she's cast a spell on him. Very cool take on the prompt.

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  14. Ashley KagaoanFebruary 13, 2014 at 6:29 AM

    This is great! I want to know more. Very interesting.

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    1. Whispering ThoughtsFebruary 14, 2014 at 8:23 AM

      Thank you so much Ashley. It is so good to hear from you

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  15. DraugFebruary 14, 2014 at 7:17 AM

    I love how you drew your inspiration!

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  16. AnonymousFebruary 14, 2014 at 11:52 AM

    Excellent, creative take on the prompt!

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  17. AnonymousFebruary 14, 2014 at 8:54 PM

    This is great - I read it three times, and liked it more each time I read it. It's a really thoughtful piece. Wonderful job.

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Since every thought is a seed, I am looking forward to a delicious harvest.

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