Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart. ~ William Wordsworth
Great post - Icy hands begin to probe. And yet, the promise at the end...
Thank you so much Kelly. It is so good to hear from you
Thank you so much.
I like this part:Bowed,Awed,By this hide and seekOfComrades.I really related to it. I love how you formatted this and it's beautiful
Thank you so much Lance. Your encouragement means a lot to me.
Thank you so much for such kind words
I like the structure and flow. Awesome.
Thank you Draug. I am really encouraged by your words
I like the way you structured it. It made me read it in a more controlled, clipped manner and brought another dimension to the beauty of the words.
Thank you so much Editors. It is always encouraging to hear such positive feedback on little pieces
Love the icy, probing hands.Also the surprise contrast of Reverent, Bowed, Awed against 'hide and seek'.
Thank you so much Kymm. It is always wonderful to hear from you
I too liked the structure. It made the poem flow nicely, lyrically.
Thank you so much Tara.
Since every thought is a seed, I am looking forward to a delicious harvest.