Blinding, baking, burning,
Merciless gold ball,
Strong as ever,
It holds the fort,
Guarding dusty dry days.
O for twilight, wait these eyes,
When the silver sliver smiles
And down rains the poetry
Linking with Five Minutes Friday - Mercy
Linking with Trifextra: Week Eighty-Five
A the days of sucking out all the energy... long live the fall
ReplyDeleteLong live the fall :) Thank you Bjorn
DeleteDay vs Night, Sun vs Moon....... took me a minute, but I got it! Great writing.
ReplyDeletebest,
MOV
Thank you so much MOV :)
DeleteSilver sliver is great paired like that. And down rains the poetry. Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Momosapien :)
Deletemerciless gold ball... that's how it feels around these parts all the long summer. Nice play with silver and gold.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Kymm :)
Delete...and down rains the poetry. I love that. Nice one, Ruby!
ReplyDeleteA love story with the night in a lovely poem. Excellent work!
ReplyDeleteThank you for linking up!
Thank you so much Editors. It is always a pleasure to hear such encouraging words from you
Delete"When the silver sliver smiles
ReplyDeleteAnd down rains the poetry"
What fantastic lines. Lovely poem! :)
Thank you so much Ivy. It is so good to hear from you
DeleteThat last line is astoundingly beautiful. Lovely!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your kind words
DeleteThank you so much Jo-Anne. Your words are so encouraging. you just made my otherwise dull day very bright. Thank you so much :)
ReplyDeleteWhat a beautiful poem Ruby! Your well chosen words create a vivid image in my mind. I hope you're doing well :)
ReplyDeleteBlessings,
Marcia
Thank you so much Marcia. I'm doing fine and I hope the same for you. It is so good to hear from you.
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