Granny often sat
By the small window
Admiring
What I thought was
Just a lonesome bunch,
Now green, now graying,
Now glistening with raindrops,
She, however,
Saw
Life dancing in every single leaf.
Picture courtesy Trifextra - Trifecta Writing Challenge
Linking with Trifextra : Week Eighty-One
"Life dancing in every single leaf"
ReplyDeleteThat line sums it up beautifully. What a lovely, tender piece. :) Great job with the prompt!
Thank you so much Ivy for such kind words
DeleteWell crafted.
ReplyDeleteThank you
DeleteThis is a beautiful piece!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Draug :)
DeleteSometimes you have to get older to see these things :) Lovely piece.
ReplyDeleteI so agree with you Lena
DeleteI agree with Jo-Anne! I love everything about this piece and that last line was absolutely stunning!
ReplyDeleteThank you Valerie. Your words are a great encouragement
DeleteA great buildup to that awesome last line.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Bjorn
DeleteThis is gorgeous. I like what her aging eyes allow her to see - great last line!
ReplyDeleteI am glad to hear such encouraging sentiments from you Janna
DeleteBeautiful. Gave me a little lump in my throat.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Jayne :)
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