Sunday, August 25, 2013

Hard came the fall

One little bird
Two little necks;
One little stomach
Two little pecks;
One found nectar,
Drank it all;
The other sought venom
In greedy call;
In went the beak,
Hard came the fall.

10 comments:

  1. This is a good warning about not having eyes bigger than your stomach...

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  2. This is Grimm-worthy. I like the moral tucked away into this. Thank you for linking up!

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    1. Thank you so much Editors. It is so encouraging to hear from you

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  3. This is fabulous! Love the rhythm and the pacing. Beautifully done!

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    1. Thank you so much Suzanne. It is always a pleasure to hear from you

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  4. Love it! Would be a great piece to illustrate.

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    1. Thank you so much for all your encouragement

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