Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart. ~ William Wordsworth
shadow shades is a wonderful alliteration... :-)
Thank you so much Bjorn
Intriguing and exotic...
I am glad you think of it this way Managua
wow ... made me remember "Ik Prem Diwaani, Ik Daras Diwaani" !
Thank you Shreya
very poetic on all accounts - the words slide off the tongue
Thank you so much for your kind words
Thank you Draug. This means a lot
Your poem flowed beautifully. I like the repetition of 'shadow shades'
Thank you so much Janna.
This is a really pretty piece. :D
Thank you so much Linda. Your support is really appreciated.
I love the repetition and the flow in this poem. Lovely.
Thank you so much editors.
Glorious drumbeat rhythm carrying me through the poem - great work
Thank you so much Thomas :)
I too liked the repeated phrase "shadow shades," it was almost like a mantra.
Thank you :)
The shadow shades, part enticement, part threat. Very seductive.
Thank you Kymm. I am glad the idea is reflected.
I think I'll be repeating "shadow shades" all day. It's just lovely and so easy to say. And to imagine with. Nicely done!
Thank you so much Renee. I am glad the words go down so well with you.
I am left wondering who we are lost to. And perhaps that is what good writing should do: leave us thinking. :) Beautiful writing.
:) If I answer this, it will be a spoiler for others ...
awesome alliteration and beautiful word usage
Thank you so much Lance. :)
Since every thought is a seed, I am looking forward to a delicious harvest.