Monday, April 22, 2013

Shadow Shades


In
Shadow shades
Of love,
Radha
Found her refuge.
In
Shadow shades
Of ecstasy,
Meera
Found her salvation.
In
Shadow shades
We wander
Lost
To love
And
Lost
To faith.
Lost
To You!

28 comments:

  1. shadow shades is a wonderful alliteration... :-)

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    1. I am glad you think of it this way Managua

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  3. wow ... made me remember "Ik Prem Diwaani, Ik Daras Diwaani" !

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  4. very poetic on all accounts - the words slide off the tongue

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  5. Your poem flowed beautifully. I like the repetition of 'shadow shades'

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  6. This is a really pretty piece. :D

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    1. Thank you so much Linda. Your support is really appreciated.

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  7. I love the repetition and the flow in this poem. Lovely.

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  8. Glorious drumbeat rhythm carrying me through the poem - great work

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  9. I too liked the repeated phrase "shadow shades," it was almost like a mantra.

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  10. The shadow shades, part enticement, part threat. Very seductive.

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    1. Thank you Kymm. I am glad the idea is reflected.

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  11. I think I'll be repeating "shadow shades" all day. It's just lovely and so easy to say. And to imagine with. Nicely done!

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    1. Thank you so much Renee. I am glad the words go down so well with you.

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  12. I am left wondering who we are lost to. And perhaps that is what good writing should do: leave us thinking. :) Beautiful writing.

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    1. :) If I answer this, it will be a spoiler for others ...

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  13. awesome alliteration and beautiful word usage

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Since every thought is a seed, I am looking forward to a delicious harvest.