"All I want is 20% of
your time to see through 80% of my love."
Silence.
"I know I didn't say
100%. That would need more than a lifetime. So?"
Light beyond the clouds
This cherita reflects the human journey through darkness and light — a reminder that just as the sun reemerges after the clouds, our souls f...
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This is so so true. But sad when you cant even get 20%. This one hit home. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteYeah, that 20% is really hard to get by but if you do get it, it makes difference.
DeleteThis made me smile.
ReplyDeleteThank you Carver. I am glad you liked it.
DeleteRuby! Amazing that you got that little twist in there with only 33 words to work with!
ReplyDeleteThank you Libby. Had to edit it over and over again till this last draft.
DeleteThat's an adorable marriage proposal.
ReplyDeleteThank you Jessie. The whole idea was to keep it light, considering my last post was a little scary.
DeleteOkay, I had to look up pareto. Once I did, this clicked, and the numbers make perfect sense. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThank you Eric. Pareto should be happy with this new found attention :) I am really glad this whole thing works fine.
DeleteSeem pretty accurate to me. Well done, Ruby. Maybe I'll actually come up with something this weekend, too. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Michele. I too am looking forward to reading your response. All the best.
DeletePercentages are ridiculous on their face, but when you see through their menaing to the person, then you understand the depth of emotion. This was a strong 33.
ReplyDeleteThank you Lance. What you said sounds so true and wise. Thank you so much.
DeleteWhat a cute marriage proposal! :D
ReplyDeleteThank you Draug.
DeleteHow great! And an original proposal. Those are the best kind.
ReplyDeleteThank you Bo. I am glad you liked it :)
DeleteI love this. Not only because of how sweet the sentiment is, but also because I learned something. I had to look up Pareto. Fantastic. Very nice take on the prompt!
ReplyDeleteWow, nicely done! Thank you for teaching me something new today, Ruby!
ReplyDeleteI am glad I could help with Pareto's concept. Thank you for visiting Sandra.
DeleteThis is really good. So cute and sweet, my heart would surely melt if this was said to me :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Janna. I really heart your compliment :)
DeleteAw. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteThank you editors.
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