Saturday, November 24, 2012

My Favorite Thing


Sweet and sour,
The blooming flower,
The ageing shades,
The greens and jades,
The reds and blues,
The lovely hues,
Springs and autumns,
Dreams in bosom,
Life, I hold, in all its glory.

30 comments:

  1. life, I hold, in all its glory

    lovely.

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  2. Lovely, Ruby. I like the tone and the flow.

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    1. Thank you Stephanie. I really cherish all you appreciation.

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    1. Thank you Rashmenon. I am so glad that you visited and left me with these kind words.

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    1. Thank you Kymm for all you support and encouragement.

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    1. Thank you Deanna. 33 words were totally insufficient for summing up favorite things. Thought I will handle it this way.

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  6. simple, sweet, and just right. this flowed very well.

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    1. Thank you Renada. I appreciate that you find this to be "just right".

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  7. I love this one's simplicity and pure imagery (:

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    1. Thank you Draug. That is a great encouragement.

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  8. This is lovely, Ruby. I like the flow and the imagery!

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  9. This is such a pretty piece. Thanks for linking up!

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    1. Thank you Editors. I enjoyed working on this and linking up with you. Looking forward to the next prompt.

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  10. This was lovely. I can just imagine a garden in full bloom.

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    1. Life void of colors sounds a little blank and bland. Thank you BetaRules.

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  12. Lovely - Embracing both. Read this three times and found it more beautiful with every reading.

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    1. Thank you Kelly. This would be one of the best compliments to get ever.

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  13. I like that third line - perfect description of the season.

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    1. Thank you Azara. I hadn't realized this when I posted. I had tried to relate it to the old age but guess your's and Tara's interpretation goes well too :) Thank you for giving me a new perspective on my own writing.

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  14. What a beautiful way to describe not only flowers but life itself. I enjoyed this!

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    1. Thank you Lucy. I really appreciate your stopping by the post.

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Since every thought is a seed, I am looking forward to a delicious harvest.