Whispering Thoughts

Rhapsody resounds, resonating for eons, what'll be your echo?

Thursday, November 26, 2015

Plenteous wishes,
Some day I'll belong with them,
Peppered night-sky stars.

Linking with Haiku Horizons

LaissezFaireNovember 26, 2015 at 6:35 AM
I liked your use of "them". It changed my vision of the speaker. Maybe even a little cowboy.
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Adas AlcoveNovember 28, 2015 at 3:34 AM
Nicely done!
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Milan RajkumarNovember 28, 2015 at 7:10 AM
Lovely ! So lovely !
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Since every thought is a seed, I am looking forward to a delicious harvest.

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