Jai Mata di

Grey and blues of skies.  Constant rhythmic reminder,  of Thy gracious glance.  Jai Ma. Jai Jai Ma. Welfare unto all  Rab rakha 

Friday, October 2, 2015

Tides rush in

The spirit lingers
The oceans breathe, tides rush in
Waves swallow this flesh


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12 comments:

  1. Can hear the ocean surf in your lovely haiku!

    Happy Weekend to you,
    artmusedog and carol

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  2. Effective flow of lines, and I like the rhythms of the word choices.

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  3. Such imagery. breathing in and ingesting flesh. :-)

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  4. Hello Ruby! Your haiku is beautiful and haunting. I get an image of a person drowning. I love the second line, 'The oceans breathe, tides rush in'. Gorgeous!

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