resonating for eons,
what'll be your echo?
Grey and blues of skies. Constant rhythmic reminder, of Thy gracious glance. Jai Ma. Jai Jai Ma. Welfare unto all Rab rakha
Can hear the ocean surf in your lovely haiku!Happy Weekend to you,artmusedog and carol
Thank you Carol.
Effective flow of lines, and I like the rhythms of the word choices.
Thank you so much Liz.
Thank you so much
Ethereal and dreamy
Thank you so much Annette
Such imagery. breathing in and ingesting flesh. :-)
Thank you so much Edwina
Hello Ruby! Your haiku is beautiful and haunting. I get an image of a person drowning. I love the second line, 'The oceans breathe, tides rush in'. Gorgeous!
Thank you so much Vashti for such kind words.
Since every thought is a seed, I am looking forward to a delicious harvest.