Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart. ~ William Wordsworth
Powerful one, Ruby...very nicely penned!
Thank you Uma
Oh awful ...echoes the cry of a female child, never born.... :-(
Thank you Mridubala. And I am so relieved that the theme comes across
Oh that is so sad. I had one of those, a baby that was never born. Still brings tears to my eyes. Very poignant and brilliantly penned with so much emotion.
I am so sorry that you can relate to this, Kathy.
Sad and powerful.
Thank you so much
well written ruby :)
Thank you Aditi
Enwombed is such a lovely word that I've never used before.
Even I used it for the first time, Cynk. I am glad you liked it. Thank you so much
So sad. I liked your description.
Thank you Marcy
Such a heart-rending thing to miscarry a daughter late in the pregnancy. It's been 30 years and my mom still mourns the loss of my would be sister. I'll have to show her this piece.
I am really sorry that this touched a sour chord.
I like the fact that you used all the medical terms in here. Why, you even know about the APGAR score. And about the theme of this: Female foeticide, we need to keep remembering these issues and create awareness
The APGAR score - I read it in a book and it stayed. I was nervous trying this theme but am glad I did.
How sad. :( But you wrote this very beautifully!
Thank you Jen
Since every thought is a seed, I am looking forward to a delicious harvest.