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A happy Ever After


They both loved one another. None had the strength to live without the other.
But the dictates of the society ruled out a happily ever after for them.
And so they thought about meeting for one last time that day.
But when the time for goodbyes came, their intertwined bodies would not let go.
…………
The blood from their cuts had formed a pool. It was too late to save them.
Or was it really late???
For their souls were rejoicing in land where love ruled ... With a clear heart and clean conscience … they had let go of their lives.

In response to Trifecta: Week Nineteen
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  1. AnonymousMarch 20, 2012 at 9:42 PM

    So beautifully tragic

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  2. AnonymousMarch 20, 2012 at 10:14 PM

    Wonderfully written. The forbidden love reminds me a bit of Romeo and Juliet.

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    1. Whispering ThoughtsMarch 20, 2012 at 10:19 PM

      Thank you. Your compliment is quite an inspiration and encouragement.

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  3. karenMarch 20, 2012 at 11:49 PM

    Heartbreaking. At least they are "free" ... still. So sad. Well done.

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  4. dunce twoMarch 21, 2012 at 7:16 AM

    A Romeo and Juliet nod? I love it! Very pretty!

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  5. SandraMarch 21, 2012 at 9:13 AM

    I agree. Romeo and Juliet came to mind, too, when I read this tragic story!

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  6. boogulooMarch 21, 2012 at 11:21 AM

    I hope for their sake they did find a way in a safe place.

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  7. LucyMarch 21, 2012 at 11:25 AM

    Thank you so much for visiting and commenting on my blog Ruby. I appreciate it very much.

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  8. ChrisMarch 21, 2012 at 5:55 PM

    Absolutely tragic, but love is a beautiful thing. Something everyone deserves and should be able to express freely. A forbidden, and hidden, love is so romantically beautiful and so fundamentally sad at the same time. Great job!

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  9. columbibuenoMarch 22, 2012 at 8:42 AM

    I'm glad they were able to get out of this place together.

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    1. Whispering ThoughtsMarch 22, 2012 at 9:19 AM

      That's a different take on the story and first of its kind. It makes me happy that you see their happiness.
      Regards,
      Ruby

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  10. ♥ Miss TeaMarch 22, 2012 at 10:32 AM

    So sad to read but they're together forever in the end and that's the real meaning of happy ever after.

    x susan

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    1. Whispering ThoughtsMarch 22, 2012 at 10:35 AM

      Yes, that is the real meaning of happy ever after. I appreciate your interpreting the little write up.

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  11. Barefoot in Blue JeansMarch 22, 2012 at 1:32 PM

    Love is so very strong. Ruby, have a nice night.
    Tammy

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    1. Whispering ThoughtsMarch 22, 2012 at 8:12 PM

      Thank you Tammy. I hope you too have a wonderful time ahead.

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  12. AnonymousMarch 22, 2012 at 4:26 PM

    How very Shakesperean. And were they really lost indeed. Perhaps their families made up like the Montagues and Capulets.

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  13. TrifectaMarch 23, 2012 at 3:31 AM

    Like a few others, I immediately saw Romeo and Juliet here and I think if that was your inspiration, you really did it justice. This is lovely piece. Thanks for linking up and see you on the weekend

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    1. Whispering ThoughtsMarch 23, 2012 at 7:49 AM

      Thank you for encouraging me. Truthfully, Romeo and Juliet came to mind only when readers saw it. But it is a great compliment for this short piece that I have written. Thank you so much.

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