Sibling frenzy
Sibling frenzy A Rakshabandhan gathering bursts with sibling chaos, fills the roads with departures, then leaves behind the unexpected stil...
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The 12 inch heel, the confident gait, The measured steps, the sudden halt, The blush on cheeks, the smoldering eyes, The hands on h...
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Ripe autumn air’s come to bless. Showering sweet November caress. We could be holding hands and walking, Silent but still talking. ...
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It was her umpteenth shift in that cramped bus on a Monday morning. She had hoped to avoid the digging arms and elbows. But to no avail. ...

I like how you paralleled the candle with the narrator’s feelings.
ReplyDeleteThank you Nathan
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