Wednesday, June 24, 2015

The last hurrah

She savored her stay with us.
Every single moment.
A slight pause,
Miniscule almost.
And then
It was time for her,
To wander
Beyond the horizon,
Behind the sun.
I still remember her last hurrah,

Alright! 80 years of heaven are up


12 comments:

  1. I like thinking of the afterlife this way. Peaceful words. :)

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    1. Thank you Teri. I am glad for your kind words

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  2. That is the way I want to go..just wandering off into the sunset. Lovely!

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    1. Thank you Kathy. I didn't want to get you thinking about going though

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  3. wow..I liked the way you took it..even I was pondering on the lines of after-life for this prompt :-) Nicely done!

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    1. Thank you Uma. I read the question and I knew this was what I wanted to write.

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  4. A lovely view on the transition between the worlds. :)

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    1. Thank you Ira. It is good to hear such kind words from you

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  5. I love the joyful approach to "the other side."

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    1. Thank you so much. I love her joyful approach to stay in this side

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Since every thought is a seed, I am looking forward to a delicious harvest.