Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart. ~ William Wordsworth
Nicely done. Not all who wander are looking to stay in one place.
Thank you so much for your kind words. And I totally second your version : not all who wander are looking to stay in one place
'You lament but ashes'. Such a powerful line. Really brings home the truth that the body is just the body.
Thank you Shailaja ... I am glad that the idea comes out
Thank you Kathy for your encouragement
Nicely done, Ruby. Really lovely answer to the question.
Thank you Christine. The credit partially goes to a friend who helped me refine the answer
What a lament!!
I love the idea of the wind waltzing in through the door, and the other trying to hold it tight.
Thank you for your kind words
I love this song of freedom! "Dust in dust, ether in ether,/I rise with smoke," and "you lament but ashes" are particularly lovely.
I loved the way you called it song of freedom ... Wish I could have titled it that way. Thank you so much
Since every thought is a seed, I am looking forward to a delicious harvest.