“Let me bag a turkey
And then,
I promise we’ll leave”.
The minutes ticked away,
The crowds thinned.
The turkey eluded.
Despite incessant attempts.
At last, he gave up.
Had to give up.
They were about to shut for the night.
Or whatever slices remained of it.
Their footsteps echoed in the parking.
She hustled close to him,
Clinging on to his arm like a lifeline.
Scared of some unseen, unknown waif,
Lurking in the lonely, isolated car park.
Scared of two green eyes,
Blinking in some crevice,
Watching their steps,
Waiting to hunt.
The newspapers were screaming precautions.
To avoid wee hours of morning
Waning hours of night,
Lonely lanes, abandoned areas
So on, so forth.
“ Take it easy honey”.
He comforted her.
Maybe he was still contemplating
That elusive turkey.
She hoped she had
Her pepper spray handy.
A puma bag on her desk
Some twenty kilometers away was er….
Focus. Breathe. Brave.
The car took eternity
To spring to life
Another eternity
Maneuvering turns for exit.
Back to lights and life
Of metropolitan road
Glistening in rainy days.
She breathed.
Relief.
But perhaps a little too soon.
The hunter was still on prowl.
‘twas night still ...
Linking with Trifecta : Week Ninety-Two
Intense- and such an ominous end. Thank goodness it's daylight when I read this :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for such encouraging feedback :)
DeleteNow there's a tale fit for telling 'round a campfire. I'd have nightmares for sure!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much. It is always a pleasure to hear such kind words from you
DeleteA brooding intense tale sure to create an unsettling feeling. Nice!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Dobson
DeleteGreat tension. I love it.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Draug :)
DeleteFound myself all wound up and then wide eyed at the end. Great suspense.
ReplyDeleteThank you Debra for such positive feedback
DeleteAfter this prompt and the creative responses, I won't look at turkeys quite the same ever again.
ReplyDeleteOh. Thank you so much Tara
DeleteThe atmosphere in this piece is built up splendidly. Great job. Thank you for linking up!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Editors. I always looks forward to hear from you
DeleteWho knew bowling was such a risky activity?
ReplyDeleteAll very ominous, Ruby!
Thank you so much Kymm. I am really encouraged by your words
Delete