It all starts
But
With a thin hairline crack.
And the next thing
You know is
That the dam has burst.
And that
There is absolutely
No stopping it.
Its like a whisper
That grows and grows
And grows
Until
It becomes loud enough
To be heard
Over the blaring din
Of surrounding minds and hearts.
Like a ripple
That strengthens to
A fierce storm.
And despite
The rush,
The flood,
The force,
One can feel
Absolute joy,
Pure, sheer bliss,
A sort of calm and peace
That is unbound,
Unparalleled,
And equally inexplicable.
But
And there is always this but
That makes things complicated.
But,
Like all exciting things,
Like playing with fire,
And not knowing if
It will warm or burn;
Like dancing on shards of glass,
Balancing precariously lest they pierce;
It comes with its risks too.
Risky – but worth the temptation.
And trust me.
You can’t go looking for it.
It comes to you – at the right time.
And when it does,
It will begin with
A thin hairline crack.
Linking with Trifecta : Week Eighty-six: Crack
Linking with Woven dreams : Whisper
Linking with Picture it and write : Ermiliablog
Ruby this is really beautiful. I enjoyed reading it very much. :D
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Linda. I am glad you liked this.
DeleteA lovely whisper!
ReplyDeleteThank you Gabriella. I guess it is the best whisper all look forward to.
DeleteEvery time I've given into those feelings its led to nothing but bad. Best fill the cracks with spackle immediately, I say!
ReplyDeleteI wish you all the luck Ming. Thank you so much.
DeleteI love how you started with a 'hairline crack' and jumped back to it at the end. Very clever. I really liked this poem and how it described the whisper getting louder and louder. Thanks for contributing this week to Picture it & write! :)
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Thank you so much Ermisenda. It is always a pleasure to hear from you.
DeleteThis is my favorite poem of yours that I've read so far, everything about it just works perfectly - the message, the pacing, the words themselves, just loved it.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Shannon. I am really honored to hear such encouraging words on this little piece.
DeleteNice throwback to the beginning, and awesome progression.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Draug.
DeleteHow lovely! I like the visuals and emotions within the prose.
ReplyDeleteThank you Lorry. I am glad the poem evokes such warm feelings.
DeleteIt is so hopeful ... you made "the crack" so full of hope ... Good job :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Shreya. It is so good to hear from you as well.
DeleteI like how it started out with the hairline crack, and you brought it right back to that at the end.
ReplyDeleteThank you Janna. I really am glad that you liked it.
DeleteThere's a beautiful, delicate balance to this poem, and that after the first reading I feel compelled to read it again, and then again.
ReplyDeleteThis is so encouraging Kallan. I am really grateful for your kind words.
DeleteAll it takes is a tiny crack!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, Ruby.
Thank you so much Kymm.
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