The rusting doors
Creaked
As his hands
Pushed against
Years of inertia,
Encountering
Familiarity
In atoms
Of
Stale air;
Tiny little feet
Wobbling in and out;
Balancing precariously
On parental love.
Carefree running
Of growing feet;
Away from
Fussing mother
And
Piling homework.
Lanky strides
Of
Teenage dilemmas;
Pandora’s boxes
Sealed with
Job, career,
Crushes, infatuations,
Lipstick and perfume.
And finally
The confident steps
Of maturity,
Closing
The not so rusty door
Behind
And walking out
Onsite;
Planning
For three months,
Extending
To three years
And now maybe
This whole lifetime.
The disconnect,
The void,
Spreading,
Deepening,
And
Strengthening,
Everyday.
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Well done! I love the progression of your words. the title is perfect too.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much
DeleteI love the way that he has to work through his whole life to overcome his own inertia and plan his future.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Jessie. It is a pleasure to hear from you
DeleteIt seems my whole life has been a disconnect. Once I discovered what my mental illness was and could treat it I was more present in the world, and yet I still don't belong.
ReplyDeleteIt happens many a times with all of us I guess. Thank you so much Lily.
DeleteYou have so much wisdom in your words. Very good my friend.
ReplyDeleteThank you Deana. Thank you very much.
DeleteThe uncertainty in this line is something many can relate to, " For three months, Extending To three years And now maybe This whole lifetime. "
ReplyDeleteYeah - it is happening all around me - people going away for three months and then settling in new lands permanently .. Thank you so much Janna.
DeleteThe flow and build of the words is really well crafted. I liked this a lot.
ReplyDeletesorry im behind on commenting. Your writing is terrific, as always.
Thank you so much Lance. It is so encouraging to hear such kind words from you.
DeleteLoved the progression from wobbling to strides, from months to a lifetime.
ReplyDeleteThank you Kymm
DeleteThere is a natural flow to this poem, I liked it very much.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Tara.
Deletethis is a beautifully stated reality of parenthood. :)
ReplyDeleteIt always surprises me how some feelings glide past all boundaries. Thank you Barbara
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