The story would need acquaintance with these words:Bhaiya – brother
Bhabhi – sister-in-law
Chachu – uncle (father’s younger brother)
Devarji – younger brother-in-law
The Venus Strikes
As
she descended the stairs, Tushar’s heart skipped a beat.
Tushar
was accompanying his brother Sahil and his sister-in-law Vani, to the airport
to receive a couple. It was a big day for his family and Tushki, as Tushar was
fondly called, also wanted to be a part of this moment. Standing in that aisle
with other recipients, Tushki seemed no less than some Greek God. And he was
quite proud of his handsomeness. So much so that he had rejected all the
proposals that his beloved Bhaiya and Bhabhi ever brought up. Vani had once
said, “Tushki, you enjoy turning down
proposals, don’t you? It’s just a game for you. But what if you fall for some
Venus and she rejects you?” Tushki had laughed it off “Venus! Yes, Venus she will be and it will not be long before I find
her”.
As
Tushki looked from that aisle, it seemed his search had ended. He had forgotten
all about his brother, his Bhabhi and the couple. All the thoughts had turned vapory
as soon as he cast his eyes upon her. “The
flight has come, Tushki. Hold the board straight or they will not be able to
locate us in this crowd”. Tushki’s reverie broke only when Sahil spoke and
he was about to ask “What board?”
when Sahil himself took the board that read “VARYUSHA AND ALEXEI FLANDERS”, the name of the couple in bold and
distinct black letters, from his hands and stepped forward. “Go, call your Bhabhi”. Tushki was upset
with his brother but his anger lasted only for a minute. “If she is in the town, we will definitely meet. After all it is not a big town, is it?” he thought and he
left to bring Vani from the car park.
The
eight years of Vani’s married life had been blissful and beautiful and Sahil
was a perfect partner. All together they were a happy family: Tushar, Sahil and
Vani … or so it seemed.
Their
happiness enveloped the wound they all silently nursed. Two years ago, Vani and
Sahil had lost their only son to cancer. Sahil and Vani had accepted their fate in
silence. They appeared normal on the outside but inside they were both broken and they were both pining. Time had not
acted as a healer. With each passing day, the pain had only increased.
26th
Dec, 2004: On that beautiful, sunny day Vani had gone shopping with some of her
friends. Sahil had been idling away his time on net when he chanced upon a card
that had Mother Miriam gazing adorably at baby Christ in her lap on it.
Old
wounds started bleeding again. Sahil stood at the window looking out in
emptiness with tears rolling down his cheeks when Tushki came to his room.
Tushki saw the card on the screen and then walked across the room to the window
and gently placed his hand on Sahil’s shoulders. “Bhaiya “.Sahil turned around, held his brother’s hand in his own
and said “You know what, Vani is not as
happy as she looks. I know her. That’s the way she is. She seems tough from
outside but every night she cries herself to sleep and she thinks I know
nothing about it. I …. I do not have words to comfort her. In fact, no words
can comfort her. I know there is a void in her heart that I cannot fill up. I
can liven up her spirits by gifts, by spending time with her but how do I
pacify a mother who longs to rock cradles, longs to sing lullabies”.
“Bhaiya, why don’t you adopt a child”.
“To love a child unconditionally, Tushki?
It’s not easy”. Before Tushki could make any comment the door sprang open
and Vani came in shouting, “Switch on the
television. God! Somebody save mankind from this disaster. Both of you, have
you any news about what’s happening?”
“Why, nothing. Everything was fine two
minutes back. Wasn’t it, Tushki?”
“Yes …. Yes, Bhaiya “.
“As if it takes years for the calamity to strike.”
And
Tsunami became the hot new topic of discussion and all other thoughts were laid
back.
That
night Vani lay awake in her bed, Sahil asked her if all was well. “I was just thinking how many children would
be rendered orphan, with nobody to care for them”.
“Dear, don’t think that hard.”
“Sahil, swear by God, that you were not thinking about it.”
“Vani, what difference do our thoughts make.
All we can do is pray and as far as helping the victims, we can surely send
some money in relief funds.”
“Sahil, what if we were
dead and our son alive! Would you not want somebody to take care of him?”
“Don’t talk in riddles, Vani!”
“It’s simple, Sahil! Only that you don’t want to understand.’
“You and Tushki, both beat the same drum. I
think I need to give it a thought.”
“Odds are two to one, dear, so you lose. I
know you will be a good father.”
“And you a good mother.”
Outside,
the dark black clouds of night were parting away as the rays of dawn filtered
into the room through curtains.
With
Vani comfortable with the thought of adoption, Sahil gave in and so next
morning they were all surfing the web-sites of various orphanages and that’s
how they met Alyosha.
Alyosha
had been rescued from the ocean where she had been found floating in a cane
crib amongst the wreckage of the ship ripped apart by Tsunami ocean waves.
Miraculously, she had been the lone survivor of that ship and had been rendered
as an orphan and homeless by the calamity that struck on 26th Dec,
2004. The girl had been taken in by the orphanage managed by Varyusha and Alexei
Flanders. Alexei had fallen in love with the baby girl the moment he set his
eyes on her and had named her Alyosha (Alexei, with love) after himself. But
both Varyusha and Alexei knew that Alyosha will have to go one day. They tried
hard not to cry as they put her name on the list of children for adoption on
their web-site.
Varyusha
and Alexei were surprised to hear about a prospective family for Alyosha in
less than a day. Then started the long process of formalities to ensure that
the family would take appropriate care of Alyosha. When the online formalities
were complete, it was decided that Varyusha and Alexei would fly over with baby
to meet the family in person and discuss the legalities and double check all
the information provided to them online.
Vani
was literally crying at the thought of holding Alyosha in her hands as she sat
in car park of the airport.
“Bhabhi, be quick, what on earth are you
doing here. The flight has come. Be quick.”
“How does she look, Tushki?”
“Bhabhi, I haven’t seen her as yet. I have
come to fetch you. Will they not be disappointed to see Bhaiya alone? So, hurry
up now.”
“Alright, alright, Chachu. “
They
laughed at the little joke as they hastily walked towards aisle where Sahil was
standing.
Standing
in that aisle, Tushki saw his Venus again, this time walking towards the
recipients. Tushki too wanted to walk towards her and talk to her and was
thinking of some possible getaway when all of sudden, he found her standing
before him, smiling gently and holding a perambulator and standing beside her
was her husband Alexei Flanders.
After
Varyusha’s visit, Tushki tied the nuptial knot with the first proposal his
Bhabhi brought up.
“So at last, the Venus has struck you,
Devarji.”
“Very hard, Bhabhi, very hard.”
Sad and happy and hopeful and hopeless. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThank you Kelly. I guess you covered almost every element of the story.
DeleteA sad but interesting story. I liked how you developed the characters.
ReplyDeleteThank you for such kind words.
DeleteLike the ending! I found the formatting a little confusing, though.
ReplyDeleteI will definitely work on it Annabelle. Thank you so much.
DeleteI feel sad for the woman Tushki will marry because his heart seems to be with Varyusha. On a good note, it's nice that Vani will be able to adopt so she can fill the void left when their child died.
ReplyDeleteJanna, it is good to see that you can relate to the characters so well. Even I feel for happy. Tushki, I hope, will learn a lot.
DeleteOh no! She was the wife of the pair delivering the little girl, is that right? I absolutely loved the little family, but I feel for Tushki's wife! She's sure to be only second best for him.
ReplyDeleteYes Jessie, you got that right. I am grateful for such appreciation from you. I can only hope for Tushki to find his bliss with his wife.
DeleteWhat a tangled web you have woven! Great job with the characters and plot. One of my best childhood friends was a boy named Tushar, so this story made me think of him. Thanks for that!
ReplyDeleteThank you editors. I am glad the story brings back happy childhood memories for you. I really appreciate your kind words.
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