The shivering silhouettes,
Fusing
Beneath
The silver sliver,
The shadows
Dancing
To the rhythm
Of
Wanton need,
The cadent crunch
Of desires,
The seeds of want
Wailing in background,
The vestiges
Of sun
Burning
In the hearth,
The embers
Consuming the love.
Fusing
Beneath
The silver sliver,
The shadows
Dancing
To the rhythm
Of
Wanton need,
The cadent crunch
Of desires,
The seeds of want
Wailing in background,
The vestiges
Of sun
Burning
In the hearth,
The embers
Consuming the love.
That was...wow. Such emotion!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your kind words
DeleteLove your use of gerunds in this, Ruby, and the play off the word 'silver' is excellent.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Kymm for such appreciation
DeleteLove that play on silver sliver! Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Shailaja for your kind words
DeleteLoved the pace and pause you created. I see the contrast from what I wrote.
ReplyDeleteThank you for such encouraging words
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