Avli, I am standing near the JLN metro
station. Trying to read the google navigator’s rights and lefts. I realize that I am either directionally or
technologically challenged. So, I am about to leave myself to the mercy of a
rickety auto rickshaw. It is some 3 minutes drive to the place and I promise,
all my senses will be working overtime. After all, safety saves.
Remember our little sojourn to the Advanced
Studies, Avli. When the grandeur had come in full view, I had literally drooled
over it with open mouth. Savoured the splendor with eyes. You, Avli, had
laughed so hard.
Well, you could reply the laugh today for I
am standing exactly in same pose.
And now that I realize how utterly
ridiculous and wildly ludicrous I look, I try to reign in my greedy side. Like I
have never been to some place like this ever before.
Alright, excitement checked. I move on. Exploring
the ruins. Relishing the surrounding greens. The evening sun and early November
air doing full justice to the aura and ambience of place. A photo here, a
selfie there. I am totally engrossed.
History
is a symphony of echoes heard and unheard. It is a poem with events as verses.
Charles
Angoff
With the evening growing, it is getting a
little inconvenient for me to tread these brick red trails.
However, the curiosity gets better of me. I
still want to explore the remnants.
I don’t feel like leaving the place.
There is an inexplicable gravity. Some force
that makes me stay.
I should but I can’t get myself moving
back. The sun has set on the place, and the hush is falling on the place with
intensity.
The guards have started to come in now.
They are hustling the people out. It is time now for the sanctum to retreat to
its privacy.
Why am I hesitating, Avli?
Why am I not moving?
What is it?
“Will
you be kind enough to take the exit to your right, Mam?”
Wait, I know this voice.
Avli, I know this voice.
I turn back but it is so dark, I can barely
see things.
It takes a time to adjust to the blindness.
I hear the voice again.
Gentle but urgent. Insistent with a force. Hypnotizing.
I am lured to it. Mesmerized.
I make out his silhouette. Talking to
tourists.
The man has an imposing presence for a
guard.
Linking with Five Minute Friday : Turn
Excerpts from NaNoWriMo Challenge : Sombre Sojourn
Excerpts from NaNoWriMo Challenge : Sombre Sojourn
Sounds mysterious. A Divine being from the other side or just someone from the past? Impressed that you wrote so much in 5 minutes. Dropping by from #fiveminutefriday.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Suzy
DeleteNow I want to read the rest of the story! Loved it today.
ReplyDeleteThank you Patricia
Deletemesmerizing !!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Neha
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