In
Shadow shades
Of love,
Radha
Found her refuge.
In
Shadow shades
Of ecstasy,
Meera
Found her salvation.
In
Shadow shades
We wander
Lost
To love
And
Lost
To faith.
Lost
To You!
Linking with Trifecta : Week Seventy-Four
shadow shades is a wonderful alliteration... :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Bjorn
DeleteIntriguing and exotic...
ReplyDeleteI am glad you think of it this way Managua
Deletewow ... made me remember "Ik Prem Diwaani, Ik Daras Diwaani" !
ReplyDeleteThank you Shreya
Deletevery poetic on all accounts - the words slide off the tongue
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your kind words
DeleteBeautiful writing!
ReplyDeleteThank you Draug. This means a lot
DeleteYour poem flowed beautifully. I like the repetition of 'shadow shades'
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Janna.
DeleteThis is a really pretty piece. :D
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Linda. Your support is really appreciated.
DeleteI love the repetition and the flow in this poem. Lovely.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much editors.
DeleteGlorious drumbeat rhythm carrying me through the poem - great work
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Thomas :)
DeleteI too liked the repeated phrase "shadow shades," it was almost like a mantra.
ReplyDeleteThank you :)
DeleteThe shadow shades, part enticement, part threat. Very seductive.
ReplyDeleteThank you Kymm. I am glad the idea is reflected.
DeleteI think I'll be repeating "shadow shades" all day. It's just lovely and so easy to say. And to imagine with. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Renee. I am glad the words go down so well with you.
DeleteI am left wondering who we are lost to. And perhaps that is what good writing should do: leave us thinking. :) Beautiful writing.
ReplyDelete:) If I answer this, it will be a spoiler for others ...
Deleteawesome alliteration and beautiful word usage
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Lance. :)
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