After the gray
A first attempt at Séadna.
After the grayness fades, morning returns in golden light, reminding us that every storm eventually gives way to beauty.
Breeze is still, blushing blue skyline
sun is sending golden light
grays are gone, skies are now benign
dazzling dawn, bedight and bright
Welfare unto all
Rab Rakha
A beautiful first attempt.. very well done. Thank you for joining in 💜💜
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your kind words
DeleteBeautiful poem!
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Thank you so much. I’m really glad the words resonated with you.
DeleteThis leaves me with a gentle warm feeling of hope ❤️
ReplyDeleteYour kind words mean more than you know. Thank you for reading and connecting with what I wrote.
DeleteThis is excellent work. I'm so glad you joined us. You're always welcome. 💜
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for your kind appreciation. Your poetry challenge gave me the inspiration and space to put these thoughts into words. I’m truly grateful.
DeleteLovely! "Blushing blue skyline".... beautiful imagery. 😊
ReplyDeleteThank you! I’m so happy you enjoyed it. Your message genuinely made my day.
DeleteLovely seadna and I loved your poem on India. I feel the same wherever I am. :)
ReplyDeleteI am so glad you could relate to the poem on India too. Thanks so much for stopping by and listening to these little wanderings of my mind
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