The spring comes calling
Each day, with clustered roses
Wreaths adorn my roof.
Each day, with clustered roses
Wreaths adorn my roof.
Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart. ~ William Wordsworth
Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart. ~ William Wordsworth
I love that spring is a welcome caller in your haiku, but the missing article feels awkward to me. Maybe replace "bunch of" with a surprising two-syllable adjective?
ReplyDeleteI wish I could get to the root of problem ... bunch of roses could be clustered roses but as I understand, I don't think it still solves the problem, right?
DeleteI love the image of roses wreathing your roof.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Jennifer
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