Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart. ~ William Wordsworth
Hope they had a life jacket on ;)
Fingers crossed ;)
You have so much packed into these lines--multiple meanings, a clear image. I especially love "Tracing the seams" and the rhythm of the last two lines.
Thank you so much Jennifer
I'll echo what Jennifer said! I love seeing how you are trusting your writing more. I love the ambiguity but also the fine line.
Thank you so much Meg
Since every thought is a seed, I am looking forward to a delicious harvest.