Monday, November 16, 2015

Etchings on tombs

For all that remains,
Fancy forgotten tombstones.
The dead frequented,
Often by birds and ravens.

Etchings of being fading.


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PHOTO PROMPT – © J Hardy Carroll
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6 comments:

  1. I love the rhythm of it. Is "birds and ravens" a pleonasm?

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    1. Thank you Mick. Now that you point it out, it does sound like a pleonastic expression.

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  2. Dear Ruby,

    Poignant and well done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  3. I liked it, especially the last line.

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Since every thought is a seed, I am looking forward to a delicious harvest.