Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart. ~ William Wordsworth
I love the rhythm of it. Is "birds and ravens" a pleonasm?
Thank you Mick. Now that you point it out, it does sound like a pleonastic expression.
Dear Ruby, Poignant and well done. Shalom,Rochelle
Thank you Rochelle.Stay blessed.Namaste
I liked it, especially the last line.
Thank you so much.
Since every thought is a seed, I am looking forward to a delicious harvest.