Friday, October 2, 2015

Tides rush in

The spirit lingers
The oceans breathe, tides rush in
Waves swallow this flesh


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12 comments:

  1. Can hear the ocean surf in your lovely haiku!

    Happy Weekend to you,
    artmusedog and carol

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  2. Effective flow of lines, and I like the rhythms of the word choices.

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  3. Such imagery. breathing in and ingesting flesh. :-)

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  4. Hello Ruby! Your haiku is beautiful and haunting. I get an image of a person drowning. I love the second line, 'The oceans breathe, tides rush in'. Gorgeous!

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    1. Thank you so much Vashti for such kind words.

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