Scorching noonday, nimble usualness negated
Neither nuzzling nestlings nor the naivety buzz
Wherefore this spartan nerve undaunted
Linking with Blogging from A to Z challenge : April 2014
Prompt challenge: Use at least two yellow things in a poem without using the word "yellow." My response takes the path of dawn—whe...
Scorching noonday, nimble usualness negated
Neither nuzzling nestlings nor the naivety buzz
Wherefore this spartan nerve undaunted
Linking with Blogging from A to Z challenge : April 2014
Very nice use of n thorughout, but I especially love the last line.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Nicki. I am glad you liked the little piece
Deletenimble usualness negated exactly how I feel on a hot hot day under a noonday sun.lovely... thank you for your whispering thoughts
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Thank you so much for your kind words Sandra.
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