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Friday, April 12, 2013

Kidology


Kind attention,
Dear Life!
For your gift:
The kaleidoscope
Of dreams
And for likelihood,
That
This plaything
Stands some chance
At life
I am
Definitely
Loving you!
And
Of course,
You’re most welcome!


35 comments:

  1. Sweet and hopeful. This one made me smile.

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  2. Lovely, Ruby. I like the title and its innocence!

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    1. Thank you so much Sandra. I am glad that you enjoyed reading this one.

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  3. I adore poetry, and this is a lovely offering!

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    1. Thank you so much Grace. I am glad that you liked this.

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  4. a love letter to life - bet it dreams of getting more of those :)

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  5. Ah the beauty of dreams & how blessed life is because of that-very lovingly expressed, Ruby:-)

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    1. Thank you Atreyee. It is good to see that the meaning was conveyed.

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  6. Love this Ruby! So uplifting. You made me smile!

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    1. Thank you Suzanne. That sounds like a good thing accomplished :)

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  7. Terrific, kaleidoscope of dreams. Sweet.

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  8. This made me smile! Nice job.

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  9. This is just bubbling over with happiness :D I love it!

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    1. Thank you Draug. I really appreciate your visit and such encouraging words.

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  10. The happiness of children comes through loud and clear here. Beautiful!

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    1. Thank you TMW Hickman. It is so good to hear from you.

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  11. lovely, Ruby. I like the hopefulness and the thankfulness in this.

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    1. Thank you so much for your support and encouragement.

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  12. If this were a color it would be pink and yellow and all the happy colors! How nice this is! :D

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    1. Oh thank you so much. This is such a sweet compliment.

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  13. The consensus seems to be that this is one cheery, positive poem. Who am I to disagree with such esteemed writers. :). Add me to their ranks, Ruby. You did a wonderful job of painting such an optimistic picture with your words. Very well done.

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    1. Thank you so much Tom. Your words gave a great start to my day. Thank you so much.

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  14. Aww, now why you gotta make me all teary-eyed and tempt me to call my children, just when I'm finally getting used to my empty nest?! I love this, Ruby! ;-)

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    1. Dana , I am really sorry, I left you teary eyed and I am so happy that you loved this little piece. It was so good hearing from you.

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  15. "Kaleidoscope of dreams" - now that is a perfectly beautiful phrase.

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    1. Thank you so much. It is really good to hear such encouraging words.

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Since every thought is a seed, I am looking forward to a delicious harvest.