The crisp black against the white moon.
The silent night, the dead winds,
Stilled by the anticipation.
The bare branches, hang low.
A little golden glow
Of a dim street lamp spreads out like a halo.
The foggy streets, so empty and lonely.
A moment of smoke, as I dare to breathe,
Little vapors rise, and dance away.
Gently they come down, like a lullaby,
The fluffy little cotton balls,
The trees, those sentries of the wintery nights,
Greet them with their open arms,
Delighted by the embrace.
A soft but thick white blanket underneath my feet,
And I leave a trail behind.
And from a distant, a cart comes jingling.
Oh, and the driver sings a song.
Anticipation,
It has been for the winters here and gone.
Anticipation,
It is,
Of a first snowfall.
Linking up with Trifecta : Week Fifty-five
This made me think of Santa's Christmas Eve ride.. "And from a distant, a cart comes jingling. Oh, and the driver sings a song."
ReplyDeleteNo deliberate attempt but Christmas spirit is all around so guess it must have reflected.
DeleteLovely wintry images! Makes me excited for the holidays.
ReplyDeleteThank you Annabelle. I am glad my words add to the holiday spirit.
DeleteYou make that first snowfall sound so lovely and sweet.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Kelly. I did try to imagine all that should happen and put it in words.
DeleteLovely poem. I love the first snowfall, especially when it's deep.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much. I really appreciate your kind words.
DeleteNever seen snow fall! Must sound strange but yeah....we wait for rain falls so snowfalls are out of question her. Good poem, felt like I had a cotton ball stuck in my hair :-)
ReplyDeleteIt never snows here either. The upper areas do get some snow but this place, none. Thank you for your kind words.
DeleteWhat a lovely poem, Ruby. Captures the anticipation of a first snow perfectly. (Although I do hate snow. Don't miss it. Not nostalgic. At all.)
ReplyDeleteThank you Kymm. I figured out the snow dislike from your Trifecta comment. So your words make me doubly happy for both the post and the blog are heavily snow laden.
DeleteGreat use of anticipation. I love the feeling of this.
ReplyDeleteThank you Lumdog2012. I always look forward to hear from you.
DeleteLovely poem. As a child, I lived where it snowed a few times each winter- and the first one was always exciting. It doesn't snow where we live, so we take the kids to see it every couple years :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Janna. It does not snow where I live too. It is a good thing that you take your kids to experience snowfall. You are building them great memories.
DeleteThis is such a lovely description of snow! I loved it from beginning to end.
ReplyDeleteThank you Draug. I am happy to be hearing such kind words from you.
DeleteSO very lovely. I know my daughter is certainly anticipating the first snow fall. As am I, especially after this poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you Lucy. I do hope you anticipation will live up to your expectations.
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