Thoughts clamor.
Stories rattle.
Musings resonate.
And, we seek one another -
As our words become our voice.
One speaking, the other listening.
And this is how we talk.
Silently, unraveling each other.
Linking with Trifextra - Week Forty - 33 words about why we write
I loved the introspection in this. So true!
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DeleteThe last line is perfect. Great post.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Bo.
DeleteI've never thought of stories rattling...Really cool!
ReplyDeleteI thought it would not be wise to leave the stories out since we write a lot of these in our blogs at least. Thank you Draug.
DeleteNicely done, Ruby! I like the way you describe "how we talk."
ReplyDeleteThank you Sandra. I am glad you liked it.
DeleteYou describe writing, and the blogging interactions so well.
ReplyDeleteThank you for such kind words Janna.
DeleteThis is beautifully written and I love the blogging implications.
ReplyDeleteThank you Lumdog. It is really very encouraging to hear such good words about the post.
Deletelove it! this is my favorite response so far. i like that you took the prompt as a poem. the last line is my favorite. beautifully said (:
ReplyDeleteThank you Renada. I am totally honored by the kind words you said.
DeleteWell said! It does get a little noisy with everything rattling around up there!
ReplyDeleteThank you Braintomahawk.
DeleteWow! Very powerful, and a great description!
ReplyDeleteThank you ElGuapo for appreciating this effort.
DeleteI like that you included having someone to 'hear' your words too.
ReplyDeleteI am glad that you like it.
Delete"One speaking, the other listening". Love that! That sums it up for me!
ReplyDeleteThank you Lucy. It is so good to hear from you. Hope you had a great weekend.
DeleteI like to two-way relationship you create here. A we as opposed to an I.
ReplyDeleteThank you Cameron. The inspiration was the blogging interactions I have with you all.
DeleteI really love that last line - truly beautiful.
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DeletePowerful poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you Carver.
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