Rhapsody resounds, resonating for eons, what'll be your echo?
Your poem flows wonderfully. Beautiful word choices, I love it!
Thank you so much Anna for such kind words
Our eyes can be the window onto the soul, can't they? In the first stanza, I wasn't sure whether 'speaking' applied to the secrets or their eyes.
Eyes definitely are a window to the soul. And 'speaking' was for eyesI will try to bring in more clarity in next post.
i love the idea of hazel eyes unraveling stories of a relationship.
Thank you so much for appreciation.
Since every thought is a seed, I am looking forward to a delicious harvest.
Your poem flows wonderfully. Beautiful word choices, I love it!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Anna for such kind words
DeleteOur eyes can be the window onto the soul, can't they? In the first stanza, I wasn't sure whether 'speaking' applied to the secrets or their eyes.
ReplyDeleteEyes definitely are a window to the soul.
DeleteAnd 'speaking' was for eyes
I will try to bring in more clarity in next post.
i love the idea of hazel eyes unraveling stories of a relationship.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for appreciation.
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