Wednesday, January 15, 2020

This is just to say

The secrets floating
in your
deep hazel eyes
speaking silently

and urge
to unravel stories,
slowly
translating them

Forgive me
I fell headlong,
completely enamored,
totally consumed .


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6 comments:

  1. AnnaJanuary 16, 2020 at 4:18 AM

    Your poem flows wonderfully. Beautiful word choices, I love it!

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  2. NorthieJanuary 16, 2020 at 8:43 AM

    Our eyes can be the window onto the soul, can't they? In the first stanza, I wasn't sure whether 'speaking' applied to the secrets or their eyes.

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    1. Whispering ThoughtsJanuary 19, 2020 at 3:43 AM

      Eyes definitely are a window to the soul.
      And 'speaking' was for eyes

      I will try to bring in more clarity in next post.

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  3. NateJanuary 16, 2020 at 12:37 PM

    i love the idea of hazel eyes unraveling stories of a relationship.

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Since every thought is a seed, I am looking forward to a delicious harvest.