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Under Your Cape, Teacher A Teachers’ Day tribute to those who shape our thoughts, nurture our voices, and gently guide us toward discovering...

Wednesday, November 25, 2015

Reverence

Warm soothing flame burns,
Licking away the dark night,
Deity or plea?


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2 comments:

  1. UnknownNovember 25, 2015 at 5:32 PM

    I love the last line, how it makes the poem bigger than its few lines.

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    1. Whispering ThoughtsNovember 25, 2015 at 10:50 PM

      Thank you Jennifer. It took me a long time to find the right words and maintaining the rules of form so it is really heartening to hear such encouraging words.

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Since every thought is a seed, I am looking forward to a delicious harvest.

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