The spirit lingers
The oceans breathe, tides rush in
Waves swallow this flesh
Linking with RonovanWrites
The oceans breathe, tides rush in
Waves swallow this flesh
Linking with RonovanWrites
Under Your Cape, Teacher
Under Your Cape, Teacher A Teachers’ Day tribute to those who shape our thoughts, nurture our voices, and gently guide us toward discovering...
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Can hear the ocean surf in your lovely haiku!
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artmusedog and carol
Thank you Carol.
DeleteEffective flow of lines, and I like the rhythms of the word choices.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Liz.
DeleteLovely Haiku!
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DeleteEthereal and dreamy
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Annette
DeleteSuch imagery. breathing in and ingesting flesh. :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Edwina
DeleteHello Ruby! Your haiku is beautiful and haunting. I get an image of a person drowning. I love the second line, 'The oceans breathe, tides rush in'. Gorgeous!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Vashti for such kind words.
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