I fell for her.
Rather crashed,
While going at 30,
Downhill,
With practically no control.
My helmet saved me.
That and 'course, Cupid.
His love-jab
Surged through my veins
Like lightning.
Andante, the amphetamine.
The backdrop blurred.
We savored
The symphony, moderato.
Do I get extra nerd-points for knowing "Moderato" meant? Oy.
ReplyDeleteYay... Yeah you do get extra points ..
DeleteFalling into crazy love. Nice job.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Kathy.
DeleteNice description here. Love the speed references.
ReplyDeleteThank you Marcy. I really appreciate your kind words.
DeleteNice take on Love and speed. Spot on!
ReplyDeleteThank you. It is good to hear that the combination clicked
DeleteI enjoyed the lightness, the humor, especially in these lines: "My helmet saved me./That and 'course, Cupid." Nice play throughout on the idea of "no control."
ReplyDeleteThank you Jennifer. It is such a pleasure to hear such encouraging words
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