Adney was not looking forward to
her journey. There was no fun in travelling by air. All it did was save time. But
one had to endure the boring faces buried in laptops and tablets.
She could survive that much. Hopefully!
She saw hands feverishly typing
on keyboards and took the hint burying herself in the worn out edition of Doctors.
The world around her blurred and
fell into oblivion.
Until that moment.
It was the thought of his
presence that broke her reverie. She looked up in time to find him making his
way through the aisle, his gait nonchalant, his bearing casual. Adney, however,
knew better.
She wondered if his presence on
that flight was a coincidence.
Her mind echoed yes. Her heart
whispered no. She did not side by either. For that moment at least.
Instead she tried to busy herself
in her book. But being acutely conscious of his presence as she was, the words from
the book made little sense.
It was a week ago that she had
walked out of her heaven with Jake. She had thought of herself as a misfit in
his perfect world. And she had hoped for things to fall back to normal. For both of them.
They had not. Neither for Jake, as
it appeared; nor for her.
So, she finally let her heart win
the battle. And with it, she sealed her fate. Forever.
Jake could surely do well with
some of her flaws. After all, was not too much perfection an imperfection in itself?
---
Adney kept sitting as did Jake. The
people around them were busy getting their handbags, switching on the mobiles, disembarking.
It was only when the two of them
remained, did Jake look back.
“We don’t want to keep the crew
waiting forever, do we?”
Adney shook her head through
smiles and tears.
---
They had walked in separately but
they walked out hand in hand.
Linking up with Trifecta : Week Thirty-Seven
Very sweet. Too much perfection is...annoying.
ReplyDeleteThank you Gina. Yes, too much perfection can get annoying at times.
DeleteThis is such a nice story. It reads like a poem, but has all the perfect details of a great work of prose. I love her inner debate about whether his being there was a coincidence or not!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for such kind words. I sure is encouraging to read such positive thoughts on the little story.
DeleteIt's not just a ittle story, it's great wtiting.I imagine this could be a bigger story. The before...the after, the possibilities are endless. I admit, I'm a sucker for a happy ending, but I really was blown away by this.
DeleteThank you once again.
Deleteoh, very romantic ending! (are you SURE they did not know they would both be on the flight?!)
ReplyDeletebest,
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Thank you. Yes, I am sure they had not known each other's plans.
DeleteOh I don't know. Does real life ever work out this way? Good story.
ReplyDeleteI do wish to hear that real life works out this way. Thank you Jeanna.
DeleteCharming and entertaining. Loved it. :)
ReplyDeleteAh! How I wish such stories were true... :-P
ReplyDeleteYeah but quite often truth is far off from this.
DeleteI loved it! That was such a sweet ending. (:
ReplyDeleteThank you.
DeleteThis sounds like the perfect end to a longer, more involved piece. How did it get so bad? What brought them together in the first place? Beautiful prose.
ReplyDeleteThank you Wisper. As to the questions that have come up, your guess is as good as mine for the time.
DeleteAw, such a sweet ending! I'm glad pride didn't get in the way and keep them apart.--JannaTWrites
ReplyDeleteThank you Janna.
DeleteOkay, the Captcha thing doesn't like me tonight. I don't think my first comment went through.
ReplyDeleteI like the sweet ending and I'm glad they didn't let pride get in the way.--JannaTWrites
I think I removed the captcha thing but I will check again.
DeleteThanks once again.
Thanks so much for linking up. Such a sweet piece. I don't know if it happens in real life, but isn't that what writing is for? :-) Hope to see you back soon.
ReplyDeleteThank you editors :)
DeleteSo sweet!
ReplyDeleteThank you Annabelle
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