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Monday, July 6, 2015

Good morning!!!

The faint fragrance drifts,
Pears and coconut oil,
Chiffon draped across her skin,
Still moist from shower,
Streak of fair waist
Glistening against crimson red,
Her umpteenth attempt to wake me up.
I pull her in my embrace,
The cooler,
Buzzing somewhere.


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12 comments:

  1. UnknownJuly 7, 2015 at 9:38 PM

    Quite the sensuous image! I can imagine how hot it must have really gotten :)

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    1. Whispering ThoughtsJuly 7, 2015 at 11:09 PM

      Thank you Shailaja. I am glad that the image comes across.

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  2. AnushaJuly 7, 2015 at 10:18 PM

    Almost tempted to cut to a duet! :D

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  3. kalpana solsiJuly 8, 2015 at 2:00 AM

    Pears and coconut oil. What a combo! I felt I was watching an Indian romantic movie.

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    1. Whispering ThoughtsJuly 8, 2015 at 6:33 AM

      Thank you so much Kalpana. It is pleasure to hear such positive feedback.

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  4. Jasbir Kaur Dalip (Beeray)July 8, 2015 at 3:13 AM

    A very Indian scene beautifully captured. Almost part of a novel

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    1. Whispering ThoughtsJuly 8, 2015 at 6:34 AM

      Thank you Jasbir. I am so happy that you liked it so much.

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  5. AnonymousJuly 8, 2015 at 6:46 PM

    I can hear that cooler buzzing.

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  6. Teri LJuly 9, 2015 at 9:32 AM

    Very relaxing and soothing.

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