tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088604664437566874.post8584942252542238750..comments2023-11-11T23:20:13.663-08:00Comments on Whispering Thoughts: An end to a taleWhispering Thoughtshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00545008138362955040noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088604664437566874.post-5615268182176077042012-08-20T09:45:18.662-07:002012-08-20T09:45:18.662-07:00Thank you editors.Thank you editors.Whispering Thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00545008138362955040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088604664437566874.post-45851221613918339172012-08-20T09:45:05.699-07:002012-08-20T09:45:05.699-07:00Thank you Carver.Thank you Carver.Whispering Thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00545008138362955040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088604664437566874.post-48997665367975892802012-08-20T04:09:08.284-07:002012-08-20T04:09:08.284-07:00I like the staccato feeling of the last part of th...I like the staccato feeling of the last part of this. It really helps to build momentum. Nice job!Trifectahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16492626287830278024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088604664437566874.post-29362492542782543662012-08-18T18:15:10.192-07:002012-08-18T18:15:10.192-07:00Even I like the intimacy that comes with eyes bein...Even I like the intimacy that comes with eyes being held.<br />Thank you Gina.Whispering Thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00545008138362955040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088604664437566874.post-49585519122765552632012-08-18T18:14:38.026-07:002012-08-18T18:14:38.026-07:00Thank you Tessa.Thank you Tessa.Whispering Thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00545008138362955040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088604664437566874.post-30912971487792251612012-08-18T16:33:38.858-07:002012-08-18T16:33:38.858-07:00This was a nice use of the prompt. Great job!This was a nice use of the prompt. Great job!Tessahttp://www.finallyawriter.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088604664437566874.post-32038435756822687182012-08-18T13:00:46.420-07:002012-08-18T13:00:46.420-07:00You had me at "eyes totally locked". I l...You had me at "eyes totally locked". I love a glance where eyes meet and a moment, whatever it may be, is shared between just two people. And that goes for lovers, friends and strangers alike.Ginahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04841767868797265391noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088604664437566874.post-22230121659508371102012-08-18T11:17:46.460-07:002012-08-18T11:17:46.460-07:00Thank you Lumdog, I do think they share special re...Thank you Lumdog, I do think they share special relation.Whispering Thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00545008138362955040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088604664437566874.post-75567492114356221352012-08-18T11:15:14.827-07:002012-08-18T11:15:14.827-07:00This is a beautiful and strong ending. I especiall...This is a beautiful and strong ending. I especially love: "...words were suddenly not needed." They seem to have a special relationship.lumdog2012https://www.blogger.com/profile/04898266027462039531noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088604664437566874.post-89825733223621931922012-08-18T10:34:34.675-07:002012-08-18T10:34:34.675-07:00Thank you Linda. It is really good to hear such p...Thank you Linda. It is really good to hear such positive words.Whispering Thoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00545008138362955040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9088604664437566874.post-84505315931767069402012-08-18T10:31:43.114-07:002012-08-18T10:31:43.114-07:00Oh I like this. Especially "words were still...Oh I like this. Especially "words were still spoken, were attended to" the word "attended" is unexpected. And I always like an ending where life begins! :DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com