Rhapsody resounds,
resonating for eons,
what'll be your echo?
Saturday, December 9, 2017
Candle
"Don't strain your eyes in dark".
So I lit one bulb.
Exasperated with my carelessness, he switched on the tube light.
His "I love you" .
Then he left.
And on his side of the bed, candle weeps silently.
I like how you paralleled the candle with the narrator’s feelings.
ReplyDeleteThank you Nathan
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