Hark! The rhythm
Hark! The rhythm. The pellet drum rattles. The dance begins. The creation, the annihilation, the fleeing in-betweens, and beyond these appar...
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The sun was nearly gone. So were the last of his passengers. That was what he thought. Driving the cab at snail-pace through city’s traffi...
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He went there. Daily. Unfailingly. His conversations, Candid, Intimate. And why not! He had Inspired That iron-man, ...
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The 12 inch heel, the confident gait, The measured steps, the sudden halt, The blush on cheeks, the smoldering eyes, The hands on h...
I love that spring is a welcome caller in your haiku, but the missing article feels awkward to me. Maybe replace "bunch of" with a surprising two-syllable adjective?
ReplyDeleteI wish I could get to the root of problem ... bunch of roses could be clustered roses but as I understand, I don't think it still solves the problem, right?
DeleteI love the image of roses wreathing your roof.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Jennifer
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